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I like the idea of reordering what BOYS stands for when you explain it as it makes people think about the acronym more carefully. Also using the smart board helped make the examples really clear.
What a brilliant idea – BOYS! I was a bit worried that we girls wouldn’t get a look in!
i really like their work. i mean look how they put it toghether and they knowed what BOYS stand for.see ya
i like what you did with the blog it was fanstastic so well done super work
I really liked it but I think you could have done better.
wow great sentences so very good
i realy like your fabulous work but it could be better if you wrote it in a story.
i love the blog but you need more.
I like the BOYS sentence BUT you could of made the sentence you a bit more interesting anyway we like the BOYS sentences.:)
You might like to tell it from the elephant’s point of view or maybe a human looking at it. You choose!
The 100 Word Challenge is for anyone under 16. You write your story then post it on your class blog as usual and when it has been moderated, you can then link it here using the linky below. You can link until
Well done BRILLIANT SENTANCES! great work
I really like your blog you could put some pictures on your blog,or you could put some languages on your blog to make your blog stand out.
us 4ch really like your boys sentences!!!
hello i am Louise i love ur boys sentences they are brill and i love all of ur videos
from louise 🙂 🙂
P:S put more sentences on here please 🙂
GIRLS WOW that was amazing:):):)
from Zoe :):):)
girls please do more senteces i love then 🙂
WOW GIRLS AMAZING please do more of them senteces 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 please the videoing needs to be a bit more work on all the rest was real good :):)
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